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Green Heart

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Beautiful picture and setting I captured with my camera just in the right angle and time against a dirty foggy winter window. Very little ps to customize the edges.


Edit software:
Photoshop CS4

Camera:
Canon 40D

Lens:
28-138mm Is Canon
Image size
2763x1920px 1.19 MB
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:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Wonderful colours and lighting we have here - I really have the right 'sitting in a greenhouse flooded with light'-feeling, now. The greens of the plants are so vivid, the colourful background underlines the happy message in this.
There are a few things to change for a better though. First I think the display size is way too huge. I cannot fullview this without ctrl+- on my screen, and I doubt many others could. I recommend a display size up to 1000 Pixel on dA. The simple, but effective shapes in your photograph allow an even smaller size. The framing is not my thing either, but that's often a question of taste. A bright and mellow photograph like this does not need a stringend frame, it can stand out all by itself.
I really like the composition of this with the relatively large negative space on the upper left. There is a dark thing in the upper right though, with which I can't quite agree, because it looks unnatural and disturbes the otherwise peaceful scenery.